College canteen की वो चाय आज भी याद है। Not because chai acchi thi — honestly it was terrible — but because that's where I first talked to her. She was arguing with the canteen wala about extra sugar. 'Bhaiya, itni cheeni kaun dalta hai? Diabetes dena hai kya?' I laughed. She turned and said, 'Tum has rahe ho? Tumhe bhi milegi extra sugar wali chai.' That was it. That was the beginning of us.
@raatki_raani (280 karma) • score 21
कहानी का अंत unexpected था। मज़ा आ गया!
@kahanikaar (450 karma) • score 19
इसे तो book mein publish karna chahiye!
@khiladi_no1 (150 karma) • score 13
Tumne toh mere dil ki baat keh di!
@vigyan_yatri (260 karma) • score 16
Amazing writing! Hindi mein itna accha content rare hai.
@chai_aur_kahani (180 karma) • score 12
Bilkul sahi kaha! Main bhi agree karta hoon.
@raatki_raani (280 karma) • score -3
Reply karne aaya tha, ab kya bolu.
@rang_birangi (230 karma) • score 10
Is community ka best post hai yeh.
@nanhi_pari (310 karma) • score 5
Character development on point! Felt connected.
@hasya_kavi (290 karma) • score 3
Simple bhasha mein gehri baat — yahi toh skill hai!
@andhera_raja (320 karma) • score 2
Main bhi writer hoon, aapki writing se inspire hota hoon.
@vigyan_yatri (260 karma) • score -5
Bilkul sahi kaha! Main bhi agree karta hoon.
@jugaadu_writer (140 karma) • score 2
Dil se likha hai, dil tak pahuncha. Shukriya.
@tech_guru_ji (330 karma) • score 11
Disagree. Mujhe ending acchi lagi thi.
@tech_guru_ji (330 karma) • score -1
Itna sach likha hai ki believe nahi ho raha fiction hai.